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["Snowfall"]

hahaha

nice! completely random, but thats howi like it. a lot of the faces reminded me of calvin and hobbs!

[Grumatorium]

asdf

it was interesting, but i didnt understand something. why would there be a severed arm next to the scanner when there was no one inside the room? the only thing in there was the monster, who was inside the tank, with no way out. it looked like it belonged there, so the monster couldnt have broken in. plus is broke through the glass to get out, meaning it was already in there.

[Hoodoos]

could have been better

i would have preferred something that made more sense. like if the tree and plant makes more than one grey creature, then should the planet be overrun by those little things? and what makes the grey things turn into the things they do? theyre so dfferent each time. and why do the corpses form the praying mantis so quickly when they took so long to form the butterfly?

i thinkt here could have been a lot of room for improvement. and a lot of stuff you could have done.

VillainousTurtleSLC responds:

Well the corpses form quickly at first and slowly second because each round is opposite. Notice that the first guy came from an arm, the second a leg. The first guy spawned while walking, the second while standing. The first guy spawned during the day, the second at night. The first guy talked, the second did not. The first guy caused a battle of hundreds, the second a chase after one. The first guys died from homicide, the second from suicide. The extra bugs, well, that's all part of the mystery of the planet!

[T E T R I S ' D 2]

too short

i think id wait longer to see a longer animation than see bits of it at close intervals.

but goodjob. i think you should make the movements more realistic though. the stickman moved too radically. make him stumble, run, and other human stuff. dont make him the ultimate fighting robot who can dodge all attacks, barely dodge a brick, and jump 100 ft in the air.

[Mouthsinging: A Story]

cool

it was good, but the animation could be a little more fluid. the running and fighting especially. like the part where the red guy slashed some zombies.

[License to Combo]

it was ok

it was cool, but the end pose for the first few were a bit pretentious. they make it look like a desperate plea for cool. i think it would have been better if the same stickman wasnt used for all of them. random stickmen fighting would have made more sense than one fighting for no reason. yeah, i dont know why that is.

[Gravitaxis ++]

wait, what?

im going to take a guess. tell me if im wrong. starting from beginning to end (or end to beginning, since time was reversed), he was some sort of thief? and the blue things were money or some sort of tech thing i guess. so he is discovered and uses his matrix powers to reverse gravity for himself. then he walks out of the house and is flung into the air. he throws out the money? then is found by one of the officers who catches him, then pushes off of him to send him flying back to earth.

dont get me wrong, im not using sarcasm. i loved it, otherwise i wouldn't have given it a 5/5

[Junior]

bravo

youve done it again. i love how all of them fit together like you planned them all out from the beginning.

[T E T R I S ' D]

nice

at first, i thought it cliche. the stickman's movements were too exaggerated, but besides that, i loved the idea of the golem thing.

KobraEditing responds:

Thanks!

[TOFU3]

let me walk you through this...

no, malade12. the story from beginning to end (not following order of submissions) is as follows. to make things easier, ill refer to the onein this submission as 1A, the one that he rescued as 1B, and the alien one as 1C.

1A finds the oracle and talks to him. 1A wants to know his destiny. the oracle sends him to the X on the map. 1A gets there, the yellow tofuzilla comes out. 1A kills it. then the purple one shows up. 1A kills that one too. the second one was 1B from when he dropped the time travel device. the reason 1B was in the tofuszilla after coming out was because he dropped the capsule as well. after finding the body. 1A sees the alien, who is 1C. 1C knows that 1C is 1A, but 1A thinks that 1C is an enemy. So in order to not kill himself, 1C escapes so that 1A doesn't kill 1C, and consequently himself. 1A takes 1B to the oracle who then gives 1A a disguise, which is an alien disguise. so 1A goes back. 1A probably took 1B with him. 1C wanders around and finds the time travel device that 1B dropped earlier. 1C takes off the disguise and returns to the oracle.

basically, the oracle is toying with him.

danomano65 responds:

the big thing is the gash on his eyebrow. just watch that and it's pretty clear what's happening. he goes to an oracle. ends up fighting two TOFUs. thinks he killed himself. seeks advice on how to stop that. oracle gives him a disguise and time device. he screws up by tripping and ends up fighting himself. watches himself go into the hut with the "dead" body and waits for him to trip. by the end he's accepted his fate and drinks some tea before he leaves to go back in the yellow TOFU. his path is interrupted by a giant white TOFU. its origin will be reveal in 4. i'm glad you are interested in this story. some people are being complete assholes and calling this a cop out. so fuck them. thanks man.