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[Apocalypse Please EP: 1 A]

hah

that was really good. your voice is perfect for this animation overvoice thing. i liked it cause it was funny, but it wasnt too random which just kills it. one thing that confsed me a little was when they turned all dark. like the blonde kid. the first time you see him, his skin turns black and i thought he was a demon. the teacher punched the kid through a wall! i thought he was infected and about to transform into a demon or something and they had to fight him! another thing i would work on is the art, like some of their faces were oddly proportioned. hmm. oh, also try to make the blonde kid's voice acting less exaggerated. doesnt seem convincing. especially when you shot him. make a punchline, then cut it off before you kill it.

ANYWAYS, i like this one. not too much senseless violence killing zombies and whatnot. just a good introduction that sets us in the right time.

[FAUX - Chapter 1]

i liked it

the only thing i didnt like was the girl's lips. they were sooo BIG! i mean, they ruinedmost of the scenes for me. you should make them more natural.

[Rise of the brotherhood 2]

ehh

1. too many pauses where nothing happened.
2. better if it was fast paced. fighting looked like a powerpoint animation.
3. voicing needs a little work. its ok, but could be better.
4. in the beginning, how did tails get in front of sonic if he got hit backwards while they were running?
5. most of the special effects like the part where the metalics turned white were pointless because they didnt do anything and they turned back anyways.

but it was pretty good. i dont want you to think that it was horrible. it was decent. im just saying it could be better.

Milanous responds:

Ok This is exactly the sort of critism i respect a well thought out one, with well made points i'll try and go through, them
1) Well made point and not the first therefore i will work on it.
2) I work at 18fps, I think it works better for this as 24 just seems to fast and the centre of it is hard to make.
3) Were working on it, but can you be more specific as to "which" of the characters need work (PM me if you like).
4) I didn't make it clear enough but what i was trying to make out was it was an area like a circle they were fighting within and they were pretty much running round in circles. I'm still learning lol
5)Metallix going white is there power boost giving them wnough of an energy zurg to keep up originally they were meant to attack as white, but i had to cut it out dude to extreme lagging.

As for all your points, i encourage it greatly, Everything can always be better and i am always looking to improve so thank you.

[& So We Love Playstation]

lol

it was good. but when you show the girl, you should make her move more instead of just standing there.

yeah, i heard the song about a year ago as an easter egg in some game or animation on newgrounds i barely remember

[The Real Legend 3]

wow

that was awesome. i see you improved since your first one by a lot. a lot of it was funny, but i think the dragon could have been better. the voice was a bit too whiney for my taste. i mean, yeah. shes supposed to whine, but dont go overboard. maybe try to say the line in a different tone.

[The Black House: EP 1]

ehh

it was ok. im not going to be an ass like hunte3r, but i have to admit that it was a little boring. if this is a series, include different jokes other than black stereotypes. thats basically the entire reason i gave you 3. good animation, but wierd art and bad jokes.

[Like Poetry]

yeah

it was good

but i think you could have made it better. the tear part was a little wierd. because usually its a single tear and you made it too big and left a huge mark like a gash on his face. the eating was over emphasized, you dont have to make both sides munch. even i dont chew with both sides of my mouth at once. the window part with the moon was ok, but i felt like it was out of place or could have been better represented. the part where he went to the figure looked like he was running/walking. i couldnt tell which so it looked like you were trying to make him run but made him move akwardly

im sorry if im being too harsh XP i think its a bad habit of mine to focus on the negative things only lol XD

[Walk in the Woods]

hahaha

that was hilarious. especially the beginning when the bear popped up. i really didnt expect what happened next XD

[Snowbot]

ehh

it was good in the beginning. a robot who plays a guitar. completely unexpected, like something that is stereotyped to be efficient playing a guitar that requires feeling i guess. or im overanalyzing it. anyways, after he flew away, it kinda went downhill. i think i liked the first part because the music created the scenery, but after a while, it just made him move and make noises with his mouth. the part i hated most was the part just before he looked at the moon. the music started to sound like some tune you hear on a merry-go-round. in the beginning, it looked like itd be deep or something i guess. then it just turned into a happy boring song :P

happy songs bore me

AKS9 responds:

well it's not really overanalysing to say that a robot that plays guitar is unexpected because music required feeling and robot don't have any. it's a pretty good analysis if you ask me.
as for the rest of your review, I dunno if you don't like happy stuff then to each his own huh.
just imagine that after end, the present falls from the sky and lands infront of a lorry full of manure, causing it to swerve off a cliff and crash into a village full of helpless women and children. then they torture the robot.

[Without A Mushroom]

hahaha

i loved the part where mario turned into the hulk and just pounced on the goomba xD

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

Tophat.