that was great!
hey, just because it was for school, i hope this isnt the end.
i expect a great series to come from this!
that was great!
hey, just because it was for school, i hope this isnt the end.
i expect a great series to come from this!
one word;
bravo.
hahaha
so much better than Brawl Funnies.
fail
the only part worth watching was the first one. everything else after just killed it, performed a satanic ritual to revive it, then killed it again. i found myself skipping through the entire thing looking for something like the first one.
so heres a warning to everyone else who thinks something else like the first part is going to be hidden in there: there isn't.
i would have scored way higher if you submitted the first part alone.
it could have been better
the 3d stuff didn't match the art. but i see a lot of potential. reminds me of kung fu hustle mostly because of the fighting. but there were some parts that were too cartoony. like the stances the 3 gaurdians took after the first strike, the giant energy sphere the ghost powered up (it should have been closer to his mouth. you could tilt him upward so it actually looks like its coming from his mouth), and the ending (obviously).
Nevertheless, well executed
wow
lilium pretty much summed up what i was going to say.
but there is something else. You could use some work on the faces. Nene should look more asian than white. Her cheek bones should be slender and taper inward to form a slightly curved tip. her eyes should be a little smaller. Pico's face was probably the best done in the animation. Except for his nose, which was a bit too big. Darnell's features were too exaggerated. His cheeks were bulging out like shrek. His nose was too low as well.
wait
didnt tom have a girl named april though?
otherwise a splendid flash. loved every bit of it. especially the chocking scene between the CC and Dad! But really, in the transition scene it says "onward we go blah blah to save our sons."
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