it was a good try
good idea, decent story, nice try. but there were a lot of issues. it lagged. a lot. also, it makes you look lazy when you already got the green gun in the first level, then lose it in the next, so you put a new one in the beggining of the 2nd level. i also think it would have been better if the voices werent so deep. he reminded me of a midget, since his voice was so low and he looked ten years old. ALSO, the part with the candy cane designed light house. I couldnt get through the tunnel. it was dumb grrr pissed me off >:[ cause i tried like every possible way of going through, but nothing worked. and the floating ball was annoying, since if you step off and its still turning, you get crushed and stuck underneath it. ALSO, on the boat level, i got sucked into the back and i went offsceen. then i paddled super fast then shot up towards the top and dissapeared offscreen. then died.
also, a minor issue, but i couldnt help putting it in x]. on the seesaw in the training, theres that little chunk of something that is part of the seesaw, but i guess you forgot to cut it off or erase it. anyways, it pretty much just moves with the seesaw and it floats in the air.
6 (-1 for lag, -3 for major glitches)